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“Delhi-Lucknow express 12004 is about to reach on platform no. 2”
The announcement was being made again and again. Mehak and Raj reassembled
their luggage. They had been waiting from past half an hour. And this half hour
became the most memorable hour of their life. It was exactly one year before
they had met here. While waiting for the train, they dwelled upon their silly
stupid chats which had tied them in a wonderful bond.
“You remember I was caught by this T.T.”, Mehak said
pointing towards a middle-age man with a potbelly who was going through a list
in his hand.
“Oh! Yes. I should go to him”, Raj said.
“Why??”, Mehak enquired.
“To thank him for making me meet a silly stupid girl”, Raj
winked.
Both of them giggled.
“It seems it was destined. My ticket got pickpocket. Your
friend cancelled his journey at the last moment. And you travelled alone with a
two-passenger ticket all the way just to rescue me at this junction”, Mehak put
their first meet in brevity.
Raj relaxed on the bench and a sneaky smile crept on his
lips.
He said,” Yeah! Out of tens of other passengers, I became
just your saviour”.
“Silly effect”,Mehak chirruped.
“Silly girl”, Raj ticked her head.
FLASHBACK
Mehak thanked Raj for helping her and saving her bucks. Raj
thanked his friend for cancelling the trip. Formal thanks-giving entailed till they came out of the junction.
Before leaving Raj put his hand forward and said,” Hii, I’m Raj. Naam to suna
hi hoga”.
Mehak shook hand and said,” Hii I’m not Simran!”.
Haha, I like it.
What??
That you are not Simran!.
So???
So, there is going to be a twist in the story.
You seem to be a die-hard bollywood fan.
Yes! Masala and romance tadka.
“All Crap. Taxiiiiii”, She waved her hand and bid him a
good-bye.
A crap bye!!! Raj was a little sad at her parting words.
“But why should I bother about her. She is just an another
girl”, Raj murmured.
He tried to convince himself but the silly girl had abducted
his wits. As soon as he reached his hostel, he opened his laptop, connected to
the internet and searched for her. But how to search?? She was NOT SIMRAN. Who
was she??? Where to search for her in Delhi??? Disheartened Raj gave all his
hopes. Days passed.
One day Raj went to a Publishing house to get his college
magazine published. He was the head of the editorial team. The man at the
office guided him to a room.
“May I come in”, Raj knocked on the door.
“ Yes, please” ,came the voice.
“Whoa!!! Bollywood Baba!!! What a pleasant surprise! What
brought you here?” This was Mehak asking the flabbergasted Raj.
Raj couldn’t believe his eyes. He got back to his senses and
stammered, “ H-a-a-e-e- Hiii! I’m stalking you”.
Oh!! Really!.
So how is everything Miss Not Simran???
Haha, I’m Mehak. I do the work of proof-reading here.
That’s great. Now read these 100 odd pages and kick out the
errors.
Ahh!!! I don’t like this. I just hate these words but still
slogging myself.
Raj was happy to find her. Now he knew the name of silly
girl.
Facebook-Search-Mehak-Send friend request.
Friend request accepted.
And then started the chatting season. They sunk themselves
in talks and talks from nowhere and everywhere.
Meanwhile Raj wrote his first novel and went to her for
proof-reading.
As Mehak read through the pages, she felt herself bosomed in
someone’s strong words.
Yes! Raj didn’t write a love letter, instead an entire novel
for the silly stupid girl he had fallen in love with.
FLASHBACK OVER-TIME IS SPEEDING NOW
The horn grew louder and louder as the train approached. Raj
cried at the loudest of his pitch,
” I’ll be waiting for your reviews on my novel”.
” I’ll be waiting for your reviews on my novel”.
Mehak and Raj hadn’t admitted it to each other till now.
They behaved like just-friends but something more was being cooked up on both
the sides. Both were enjoying this unavowed romance.
Both left for their home.
It was Diwali. Mehak called up Raj to wish him.
“Huulo”, a heavy voice spoke from the other side.
“May I speak to Raj please”,Mehak asked.
“Beta! He went missing since past five days. DO you know
where he is??”, the voice asked in plea.
Mehak couldn’t believe her ears. She ransacked all their
mutual contacts, Raj’s college, his whereabouts but no ray of hope kindled.
Each day she read his script where he confessed his love.
Today Raj is still missing. Mehak added a few more chapters and completed their
love novel.
As soon as the novel hit the book stores, it came out to be
a best-seller. The media persons approached Mehak asking about how the idea came to your mind? Are you
a professional writer?? And a lot more questions queued up.
Mehak answered in a very simple manner.
"I’m no professional writer.I never liked these silly stupid words.
I never understood the feelings attached with them.
But a silly stupid boy made me feel these words.
He left behind his legacy in his words.
He made me write all what I feel.
And today writing to me is my first love."
Mehak confessed their love in public and wished Raj would soon appear with another of his novel for proof-reading.
Hioy'oy Hoi Polloi
JJJ
i think reason of your love for writing will make a better story than this one.
ReplyDeletebdw nice story.
Again I'll just say love makes you do things whether you want or not. It's just a way to keep going :)
DeleteI hope Raj would appear in the next part...as i don't like parting with tears...though none of my own stories written in over 3 years end with a happy ending...!!!
ReplyDeleteI strongly wish Raj makes a comeback. But alas! he is missing for now :/
DeleteCops plz help :D
nice read.. but little sad.. now, where is Raj? plzz cops help finding him.. better do it soon for a happy ending..oh no.. for a happy start.. :-)
ReplyDeleteSometimes sad story should also be made palatable. I again heartedly wish Raj finds his way back to Mehak.
Deletesuch a beautiful story with a tragic end. Hope India TV finds RAJ after the success of his novel. I believe only India TV can do that :D
ReplyDeleteI am planning to do the investigation myself. :D
Deletenice story. Hope the next novel comes out soon :D
ReplyDeleteFingers crossed. Hopes alive :)
DeleteSurbhi...This definitely needs a sequel...We want Raj back !!!Can you hear the chorus...??
ReplyDeleteLovely story...beautifully penned:))
Haha :D
DeleteThank-you so much ma'am for marking your words here.
Well!!! I have set my cops in action and RAJ will mark a commendable entry soon with all of you raising hands in praise. :P
I think it did have a happy ending (from the beginning)... Only the speeding flash back was sad and giddy and lovely. :)
ReplyDeleteBut how did they find Raj, And what about the another book... need details, Another story please. :)
I have taken your words into account. I wont let you down and soon you will be reading the part-2 :)
DeleteThank you :)
Deletelovely and touchable short story.......:-))
ReplyDeletenice starting .........keep it up..:-)
Thank-you :)
DeleteKeep reading , keep acknowledging :)
OK surbhi! I want Raj back in the next post.! I want Mehak and Raj to unite....
ReplyDeleteYou are writing another post aren't you!
I am waiting :)
OH!!! Akash you make me work so hard.
DeleteOkay Boss!!! Stay tuned and seeing this overwhelming response I'm penning down the sequel. Hope you all find it worth and even not then go for adulation guys. :P :P
U write so well :O
ReplyDeleteNot better than you. :D
Delete:blush: :blush:
Nice read and please continue the story :)
ReplyDeleteThank-you Sir :)
DeleteYeah!!! I'll be soon posting the sequel. I hadn't thought this story written in haste in order to meet the deadline will require a sequel . :D
@all : I have penned down the catena of this story on your demand.
ReplyDeletePlease check the link
Is Raj Back???
Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)