फूल की खुशबू का जादू
अगर तुम्हे मदहोश कर दे
तो खुश हो तुम |
शिशु की खिलखिलाहट
अगर तुम्हारे मुरजाये चेहरे पर
दो लकीरे ले आए
तो खुश हो तुम |
पत्तो की सरसराहट
अगर तुम्हारे रोंगटे खड़े कर दे
तो खुश हो तुम |
समंदर की शांति
अगर तुम्हारे अशांत मन को शांत कर दे
तो खुश हो तुम |
चाँद की छनती चांदनी मे
अगर तुम तारो की बारात मे शामिल हो
तो खुश हो तुम |
खुश न होकर भी
अगर दुसरो को खुश कर सको तुम
तो ख़ुशी के असली हक़दार हो तुम |
Hioy'oy Hoi Polloi
JJJ
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ReplyDeleteHmmmm nyc 1.... You put it well... But aftr read ir.. I feel k khush nhi h ham..!!!! Achi eachna... Keep writing...
ReplyDeleteApni bagiya me Khushi ka fool khilane ka gur batati hu fir to agli rachna me. :)
DeleteHmmm really..!!! Thanks.. Wait fr ut agli rachna... Ham gur sikhna pasand krenge... Keep writing... :)
Deleteati sundar...khoobsurat!:)
ReplyDeleteApka dil jitna khubsoorat hai, uska hi ek ansh he ye, Maa. :)
DeleteNice poem.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank-you Ankita :)
DeleteI like the way u mix ur poems in hindi and english....nice work kiddo ;)
ReplyDeleteAre you kidding? ?? :p
DeleteKiddo things are pure and affectionate, aren't they??
Wow.. i loved the star line a lot. And your poem reminded me of 'to zinda ho tum' from ZNMD ..
ReplyDeleteHave been reading your hindi poems off late.. love them .. there is lot of thought and feelings entwined in those words.. Amazing Surbhi!
You caught it so correct. 'Chamak rahe ho tum' is also lovely. I'm glad to meet my secret admirer. Welcome to my space.:)
DeleteSurbhi dear, you are equally proficient and dextrous in both languages Hindi as well as English. The poem is very impressive and thoughtful, the last three lines, "Khush na hokar bhi, agar doosron ko khush kar sako tum toh khushi ke asli hakdar ho tum " are beautiful and true for all times.
ReplyDeleteLove Granny
Granny! I'm all elated to receive such kind words from you. But I feel I have to tread miles to become worthy of your much coveted tags. A heartfelt Thank-you for being by beacon all these days. :) :x
Deleteaattii sunar prasaniya :)
ReplyDeleteक्या खूब लिखा है सुरभि | इसे लिख कर तुमने हर लोगो के चेहरे पे खुसिया लायी है | ऐसा लगता है अंतिम की पंक्तिया तुम्हारे लिए ही है !!
ReplyDeleteIse kehte hai shabdon ka mayajaal . Bahut penni nazar hai tumhari, Rohit :P
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