Colorful Mirror

The girl out there
Waved at me
Bright and Galvanic was she
Appeared vapid and tepid me
Waived a Hello at me
I wavered and looked around
Yes You! The specky in blue
You look so blue in Blue.
You look pretty pink in pink, I zapped whew
I put on the color to whole me, bragged she
Not like you who just wrap the color around
Excuse me! Who are you??? I grumbled
Oh Common! Put aside your colorful etiquette
Talk to me straight and loud, rumbled I
Yes! Talk to me loud and clear, she repeated the same
Before could I howl at her, the driver honked high
Seated was I at the back peeping into the rear mirror
I got down, paced ahead cutting the crowd
Welcomed was I after such a long
You look pink in blue.



  1. well,ay be it is time to go blush in Pink with Blue on

    1. Hehe !!!! Yes, you told the right pick. ;)

  2. by the way.. you do really look pretty in pink and adorable in blue ;)

  3. Lovely, cheerful and colourful :).

  4. I loved your choice of words Surbhi :) Prolific and beautifully intermingled!

    1. Thank-you so much Aditi. I'm all learning from you. 2):)

  5. A very delightful and eye catching poem. Brilliant!!

  6. Delighted to see you Granny. Love !!!! :x


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