White words on white paper
Want to express a lot
But dont know the manner
The white engulfs another white
Leaving the white (paper) blank behind
Eventually I got keyed as callous.
But the white holds all the seven
And so do me as stoic and stirred
A diamond is needed to look
Through the plain light
Displaying vivid iridescent colours.
Hioy'oy Hoi Polloi
JJJ
White words on white paper is as good as being blank. Nice poetry. Like it
ReplyDeleteAnd that BLANK is often termed as 'dead-like', completely callous or heartless. Thank-you Sir for the appreciation. :)
DeleteOften those seven colours mix so fine in our life, making it white and blank unknowingly!! Nice one dear!
ReplyDeleteYeah! you got it so correct. :-bd
DeleteWhite imbibes all the seven, so scattering (dispersion) is must to get a rainbow.Happy to see you after a long time. :)
Nyc poetry.... Keep wrirting... Thanks for visit my blog and commented i am so glad..plz keep visiting...!!!
ReplyDeleteThank-you. Spreading Smiles. :)
DeleteBaap re, kya bombastic words use kiya hai...I will have to open a dictionary :O
ReplyDeleteBlatant plain and simple. :-B
DeleteTo bring out all colors we need a diamond! Lovely poem Surbhi!
ReplyDeleteIts always so pleasant to hear from you, Valli!
DeleteYou always get the right nerve of the verse. :) :x
Hey Miss Vivacious Surbhi, this little piece gets huge every time someone reads it. You crafted it brilliantly!!! Keep it coming :) \m/
ReplyDeleteWhoohoo :D I love being called Vivacious :x
DeleteThank-you for such a lovely tail. I'm elated that someone is reading it again and again. 2):)
Hello Surbhi, Happy Shivratri.
DeleteWhite on white is equal to white but NO white on white is RAINBOW bright !! great idea !! Great poem . Proud of you grand daughter.
Waaaoooo :) You quoted such a lovely limerick. :x
ReplyDeleteFeeling blessed with your words. 2):)
Happy Shivratri to you too Granny. :)
Marvelous---Color perception is a prime for an optics lesson. Have you been a student of Physics??? I liked this very much, dotty! hugz
ReplyDeleteYeah! I love physics :D
DeleteI'm honoured by your lovely appreciation. Hugs back at you. :)
White has always been magical and mystical hiding all the colors..It just needs a medium to spread them..Likey likey.. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers and smiles
Thank-you so much Odyzz for the thumbs-up :D
DeleteYes! White absorbs all the magic. So diamond is the magician here to bring out the splendid panorama. :)
Beautiful! Bringing the beauty of colors and writing!
ReplyDeleteYour presence and words mean a lot. Thanks a ton ma'am. Keep visiting. :)
DeleteA day, Came a thought
ReplyDeleteGoogle have for each needle, a lot
Let I see, about the Colors
Google have what multi-colors
Wandering throughout the Internet
at last, the blog I met
For colors, have few words
Depicting a lot n lot of worlds
The words, She beautifully garlands
Mapping the White, on the paper-lands
http://ravikavisisodia.blogspot.in/
https://www.facebook.com/SomeWords
Should I append this??? :-O
DeleteYour poems are always thought provoking instilling emotions at the best. :) Thank-you for this beautiful verse. :)
You are a finest blogger, Nice work keep posting......... please
ReplyDeleteFrom How they do that
OH!!! Thanks a ton for this exaggerated appalud. :D
DeleteYour pictures speak better than words. Kudos! :)
that was beautiful depiction surbhi :) love your name too! lyrical it is and suits you perfectly :)
ReplyDeleteThank-you Maliny Di. I'm glad that you liked my signature. Well! that's what I believe in and follow it, so it suits me. :D
Deletethat was an amazing read!! had to read it a few times to understand completely. will go through your blog archive tonight :)
ReplyDeleteIt's my pleasure to have you here, DJ, the Gag king. :D
DeleteI'll make sure from the next time that you get the theme in one read. :P
white words....omg...
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