Tuesday

MOVING ON



I was born silent in the dorm room
My life started racing soon.

I was enjoying in the cradle
When my life started pedalling the tricycle.

I was sent to the school
My life carried the bulky bag blue.

I went to the exam-hall each time
When my life scribbled the answer sheets in time.

I stopped seeing the hurdles hurtling my way
My life kept them all at bay.

I snapped when my friend turned foe
Then my life befriended my soul.

I cried when I lost my love
My life smiled making me love my heart.

I craved for happiness in my bag
When my life bought me some gags.

I went to the pool so cool
Where my life poured out all my blues.

I sat for a while to look at the sky
When my life chuckled to sail high.
 
One day I asked, “What do you want my Life??”
My life said,” I’m so smooth to slip away.
I’m so fragile to break away.
Don’t just sit, Don’t just pinch.
Move with me, Dance with me.
For I may not be with you tomorrow.”

That day I said,” Life is all about moving on.”
When my life was breathing hard at the ventilator ON.
Hioy'oy Hoi Polloi
JJJ
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14 comments:

  1. Unknown11:37 PM

    Agree...to you points...and you have beautifully mentioned your points via prose...life is about living...and no one knows...what life has in store for us in future...so it's best when we live it...when we have it...by moving over from our scary...past...!!!

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    1. Surbhi Bafna12:04 AM

      Yeah!!!
      Living in the present and moving with the time is all what about life is. You can change the course of your life with your determination and afterall it's your life, so live it in the best way :)

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  2. Unknown2:02 AM

    Reading this post I remember a few lines by PINK FLYOD which I would love to quote:
    Looking beyond the embers of bridges glowing behind us
    To a glimpse of how green it was on the other side
    Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again
    Dragged by the force of some inner tide

    This post shows your in depth and clear knowledge about this short life.. Your propensity to realize and make us realize that.. ITS NOW OR NEVER.. is amazing.. :)

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    1. Surbhi Bafna12:16 PM

      You caught the nerve. Yes!!! to live life, you have to love life, howsoever nasty it is, afterall it's just your life. So embrace life as a whole. Everything short is sweet and that so is our life. :D

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  3. Unknown5:00 PM

    nice representation of life.....:-)
    very touchable lines''One day I asked, “What do you want my Life??”
    My life said,” I’m so smooth to slip away.
    I’m so fragile to break away.
    Don’t just sit, Don’t just pinch.
    Move with me, Dance with me.
    For I may not be with you tomorrow.''

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    1. Surbhi Bafna7:01 PM

      This conversation can be felt at times we are in despair and hope knocks our doors. :)

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  4. Easwar Arumugam5:17 PM

    Yep, life is always moving; don't stop for any one. Life's movements nicely captured. Like this poetry.

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    1. Surbhi Bafna6:57 PM

      Thank-you Sir for approving my verse. :)

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  5. Akash Govindarajan7:35 PM

    Nice poem:) one life live to fullest! :)

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  6. Neo Imaginations9:30 PM

    Very nice poem. Keep it up and keep writing more Surbhi.

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    1. Surbhi Bafna9:56 PM

      Thank-you for the appreciation. Keep visiting :)

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  7. Anonymous11:47 AM

    Life is sure about moving on!!
    Loved it !!

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    1. Surbhi Bafna4:17 PM

      Yup!!! This is what I voiced this time vehemently.
      Thanks for visiting. :)
      Keep dropping to this space. :P

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